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Lil Things...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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How much love can a woman bear,I'm not sure now let me see
I don't know about the others but too much is not enough for me
I would love to have my hair brushed and kisses on my nose
Lovingly held while I go to sleep and waking up to a rose
Laying together on a secluded beach, our love warmer than the sun
Whispering softly in my ear that I'm his only one
Walking with me in the rain,and gently holding my hand
Forgiving me my lil mistakes,telling me he understands
Taking me up on the mountain,a cosy picnic for two
Relaxing in the shade of a tree under a sky of blue
It's all the simple lil things that I absolutely love
And of all these simple lil things,I could never get enough.
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LovingWhispers
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2003-03-10 19:00:00]
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Re: Lil Things...
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by Damien on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 08:15:10 PM AEST
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| oooh! that was very romantic - Damien |
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Re: Lil Things...
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by wordsy on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 08:23:29 PM AEST
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just a love junkie, lol
A really nice read,
wordsy. |
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Re: Lil Things...
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by Lone_er on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 09:04:24 PM AEST
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Absolutely it is the little things that make life and love beautiful. Well written maam.
Russ |
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Re: Lil Things...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 10:30:41 PM AEST
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Now...these I can live with!!! Lovely write...
Jenni |
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Re: Lil Things...
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 05:06:42 PM AEST
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Wow great poem lucky man whoever your married to. Another gem you've written!
Bobo (JOel) |
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Re: Lil Things...
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by emystar on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 04:04:55 AM AEST
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Very good work!
Enjoy it for sure 'cause some of us neveeer get that.
Take care,
emy |
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