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Bleed
Contributed by
williamdye
on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 04:01:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Tears upon my cheek
To my knees I weep
Do you not hear my silence?
Behind my smile
Dark and sadness
Watch me bleed
Alone, trapped
Within your sadness
Humility, pain, and agony
Alone in my solitude
Desperate to feel my pain
Desire for death
Please kill me
I cry for your touch from yesteryear
Please forgive me
As I will never bleed for another
I will always bleed for you
Copyright ©
williamdye
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2008-02-20 04:01:22]
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Re: Bleed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 04:11:17 AM AEST
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Beautifully written. Such pain and emotion. this was really well done and well relateable. I really liked the last line.
Take care
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Re: Bleed
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by Compton-tre-block on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 05:58:40 AM AEST
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Re: Bleed
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by althea_kendry on
Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 06:44:05 AM AEST
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u r an excellent writer. th images u portray r very vivid 4 me. great job!!
never give up tho .. u mite feel suicidal but there's always hope in life trust me i no bout this all too well .. there is always hope, a brighter 2mrw, n a shimmerin chance tht 2mrw th pain .. th agony .. th desire for death .. there's a chance it will all disappear n grant u happiness :)
keep holdin in there n u will find this to b tru also :) |
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