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Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 04:00:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My frustrated heart it sometimes weeps
For the words I wish I could speak
To tell you how I am truly feeling
How desire for you it sends me reeling
Your kindness it has no measure
My time with you it is a pleasure
Your presence makes me feel brand new
And I know I am in love with you
But we promised to keep it strictly as friends
Just platonic, no twists and romantic trends
A partnership based on honesty and caring
So why is it a sad face I now am wearing
Torn is my heart, by deep routed desire
That tears at my soul like red raging fire
I want to tell you, but am scared if I do
It will be the end of me and you
Love hurts sometimes, and I alone must fight it
For sometimes it remains, unrequited
Is it wrong to be foolish , to love him this way
For I have not found yet the words to say
So desire I hold for him deep in my heart
And tears they fall when we are apart
Love lies bleeding , for want of emotion
And the one I love he has no notion
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2008-02-20 04:00:30]
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Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep
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by Compton-tre-block on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 06:04:42 AM AEST
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| I LIKES IT WELL DONE... |
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Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep
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by funnyface09 on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 10:01:09 AM AEST
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thanks for the saying what is inside my heart all these while...
i hope time will make you feel better...
great write..thanks for sharing... |
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Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 01:52:54 PM AEST
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wow, this is heart wrenching but it could never be said, better.
Awesome.
Hangtuff, Sue, as there's always hope.
big ole huggs,
emy |
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Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 10:16:07 PM AEST
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omigosh sue! That last line has such a sting to it. I defy
anyone to read this and not feel !
very emotive and heart gripping ~
~Breezy
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Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep
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by brew on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 07:16:33 AM AEST
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Such beautiful emotion. Im sure they will know if not already known.
brew~ |
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Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep
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by madhusudan on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 08:57:19 AM AEST
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| i read this poem and im like ok...and something made me read it again...and im like god! this is beautiful...it has moved me so much...i sometimes wonder how pain can become so creatively emotive! |
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Re: Desire it Makes My Heart So Weep
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by GingerB on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 07:22:12 AM AEST
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Wonderfully done! So full of emotions. I know the feelings all too well.
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