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Your Love
Contributed by
Trish73179
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Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 09:19:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your Love
Your love is one of a kind
I'm proud to say it's mine!
If you hadn't came along, I'd still be incomplete
But now until eternity, I have you and you have me!
Your love, like a prayer, soothes my soul
You opened my eyes and made me whole!
Your love, like a mountain, so protective and strong,
I've dreamed of someone like you for so long!
Your love, like the wind, feels so good to embrace
To feel your breath against my face!
Your love, like a song, eases my fears
With a simple whisper, you make them all disappear!
Your love, like a rose, is still blooming for me
With just a smile from you, I know you're perfect for me!
Your love, like a miracle, came to the rescue
I was dying inside then I turned around, there was you!
Since then, you've had my heart - you're my white knight
Until you, I never believed in a love so right!
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Trish73179
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2008-02-21 09:19:06]
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Re: Your Love
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by GingerB on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 07:10:16 AM AEST
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Awwww what a touching write. No wonder they read it at their wedding... It's wonderfully done...
Keep up the good work.
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Re: Your Love
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by 5MinutePoet on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 09:32:31 AM AEST
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Very nice.
Although can't help feeling that there may be a little back story here???? |
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Re: Your Love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 08:03:51 PM AEST
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Good old white knight, always seems to appear at the darkest hour !!
Nice write and I'm sure it was well appreciated.
Steve |
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Re: Your Love
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by ZiggyB on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 11:37:35 PM AEST
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| This is a nice write. Although I sense there may be more to this than meets the eye. lol |
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