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fly away
Contributed by
shanik
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Tuesday, 26th February 2008 @ 07:32:10 AM in AEST
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i don't like it here
i want to fly away
i feel a deep agony
that wants to break away
but i'm trying to understand
the thoughts that are in my head
though the more i try
the less i understand
i want to fly away
maybe to a calm place
i want to fly away
to a place with no end
i want to fly away
to a place i can relate
i don't like it here
i'ts full of hypocrites
i want to break away
please help me fly away
to a place i can relate
to a place with no end
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shanik
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2008-02-26 07:32:10]
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Re: fly away
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 26th February 2008 @ 05:19:08 PM AEST
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Wow that was powerfully sad
I could tell with the words that the sense of lost was meant to be relayed. Nice write
Whisper
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