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Coach Solomon's Game Of Life
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Tuesday, 26th February 2008 @ 09:48:42 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Coach Solomon's "Game Of Life"
Shake it off son!
You getcher game face on!
Donchew show em no fear!
You caint show em no pain!
Its Game Day!
Every day is game day coach.
How rightchew are, yessir!
How rightchew are!
Now git on out there
An show em whatchew got
Whoa, hold up! Wait a minute!
Whassat cher doin?
You tearin up on me?
You goin all weepy eyed, boy?
To quote the legendary Tom Hanks
There aint no crying in baseball!
But this isnt baseball, coach.
In fact this doesnt even really
Seem like much of a game at all.
Oh, now you got it wrong there, son!
Yep, atzright, cha got it all wrong!
This here, wull its tha greatest
game there is! Its The Game Of Life!
And Life, whelp, I tell ya sures spit,
Life dont take no prisoners!
No no, I suppose she doesnt.
But, she does seem to make them,
Then she does all she can to break them.
Aw, now donchew fret none over that.
You jus take yerself a moment or two.
Then gitcherself up, pat cherself down
An walkit off, boy. Well getcha back
Out there in no time, no time at all.
Sorry Coach
Im afraid no amount of time
Is ever going to shake this,
And walking wont get me anywhere
At least not anywhere near
To where I need to go.
Dont worry though.
I found my Game Face.
I got it on again, Coach.
(look at me)
Send me back in
~ Nazmythian ~
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Nazmythian
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Re: Coach Solomon's Game Of Life
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th February 2008 @ 07:12:31 AM AEST
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Scott,
I enjoyed the entire write and the style in which you wrote it. You took me along on a journey here. Made me smile.
You keep that game face my friend and away you go!!
No need to run or slide into base either....... it is all right there with you. *winks*
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Michelle |
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Re: Coach Solomon's Game Of Life
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 10:40:00 AM AEST
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Nazzy,
I like how this is light-hearted and the coach's stanzas are nearly comical in parts, but once you're done reading it you can't help but apply it to your own life and realize the depth within it. I think what you've mastered here is how to speak to any reader and that takes talent. Nicely done.
Love and peace,
Chels |
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