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Help, My Souls slippin, I need Touch
Contributed by
ThaMikeMan
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Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 03:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dear Lord i dont ask for much
I just need that soft gentle touch
My moms drivin me crazy
Im gettin lazy
my grade are slippin
My confidence is dippin
My struggle is gettin deeper
it seems like the hill of happiness is gettin steeper
My moms greed for the green is mean
Lose a buck that lady will blow steam
Everytime i breath, Im lied to
I wish hope was something you could be tied to
I need a girl to shine light on me
so i got someone who will fight with me
i need a friend to trust
someone down for me, its a must
my oldest sis is tight
me and her never fight
but shes away married so i dont see her that much
God, i need your touch.....
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ThaMikeMan
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2003-03-11 03:20:00]
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Re: Help, My Souls slippin, I need Touch
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 04:29:02 AM AEST
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| very good expression of your thoughts. venkat |
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Re: Help, My Souls slippin, I need Touch
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:38:15 PM AEST
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| Hang in there! Life looks bad now but it will shine later! Keep writing! Christina |
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Re: Help, My Souls slippin, I need Touch
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 12:52:11 PM AEST
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{{{{{{MIKE}}}}}}}
A nice warm hug.....
for a job well done!
Angel always....Godspeed 0:-) |
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