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Special Someone
Contributed by
alibof10
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Thursday, 28th February 2008 @ 03:03:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Looking into your beautiful brown eyes
Sparkled, feeling so fine
In a heart so divine
Which leaves Goosebumps on my spine
And that breath-taking smile
Is worth more than a mile
While your dark brown hair
Dances in the blowing air
That heart break killed me
Leaving me scattered
My soul ripped out
Im sad
If only you could see
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alibof10
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2008-02-28 15:03:00]
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Re: Special Someone
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th February 2008 @ 09:19:40 AM AEST
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Bravo. For your very first poem I think this is brillant and written beautifully and effortlessly. The ryhming was great. I liked this poem you have the beautiful significance of having someone you have feelings for and then turn it into a tragic ending with your sadness. Well done.
Take care
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