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The brief encounter with Craziness
Contributed by
little_genna
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Friday, 29th February 2008 @ 01:07:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My life has gone crazy since you,
You say yours has too,
We hardly know one another.
A brief moment in time,
A feeling so sublime,
You not being here is harder.
Hours spent in each others arms,
To my heart it was like balm,
You were so close to being my lover.
So quickly you were gone,
Leaving my heart without a song.
This almost makes life tougher.
It is so odd how you swept into my life,
I didnt even feel my strife.
You are quite the charmer.
The thought of you makes me break out in a smile,
You put all my bad feelings into exile,
I feel like such a dreamer.
DP
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Re: The brief encounter with Craziness
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 11:26:08 AM AEST
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Girl,
Your really did it justice with your title.
Very good work.
Remember, one day at a time.
A masterpeice of beauty and wonder.
Luv ya,
emy |
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Re: The brief encounter with Craziness
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 12:04:02 PM AEST
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I have to agree with emy, the title really is the hook that draws you in.
The good thing is that the rest of the poem keeps you on the hook from first to last word
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Re: The brief encounter with Craziness
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by BRIDGI on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 01:24:38 PM AEST
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wow..
thats crazy...
ive had that hapen but were good friends...but i like it....great emotinal expressions... |
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Re: The brief encounter with Craziness
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by Mangs on
Monday, 17th March 2008 @ 06:24:06 AM AEST
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such is life...of brief encounters, longings and a barrelfull of possibilities...
someone has wisely said
...care more than others think is wise;
...risk more than others think is safe;
...dream more than others think is practical;
...expect more than others think is possible.
wonderful write..
Love always,
Umang. |
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Re: The brief encounter with Craziness
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th March 2008 @ 01:54:18 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, laced with deep sincereity
and emotional output. great writting . . .
Ben |
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Re: The brief encounter with Craziness
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 02:36:45 AM AEST
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Wow, what a great experience, and great job putting it into flowing words. I enjoyed this and lived vicariously for a moment. Thank you.
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