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Position Of Sadness.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 08:00:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Mind guessing
Fingers pressing
Against the temples of my mind
Solace I cannot find
A photograph pressed to my chest
Tears stain the place
I lay my head to rest
This is my position of sadness
I escape reality
Into my grim fatality
Fists clenched
Wrists drenched
In all the love I've bled
Memories stained red
This is where I lay
Where I pray
Where I rest in pieces
As my body releases
Broken emotions
Twisted notions
Sinking
Thinking
About the things I cannot undo
Staring at the photograph of you
Still pressed to my chest
Just to be able to feel you near
Right here...
In my position of sadness.
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bleedthelove
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2008-03-01 08:00:35]
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Re: Position Of Sadness.
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by shelby on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 11:58:15 AM AEST
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I felt each moment and word of this write. The manner in which you wrote it just added to its depth of feeling and emotion.
Where I rest in pieces......... god that is hitting you have spilled yourself over poetic very poetic.........
Sorry for the heartache though.......
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Re: Position Of Sadness.
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by BRIDGI on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 12:49:47 PM AEST
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| wow...that was intence...i think its a really good poem...but one question...do you really want to do that?...die?...i mean i know my poems are like that but wen i think about it...i dont want to die...thats just the toughts that go through my head....i was aondering if it was the same for you.....or am i the only one...haha.... |
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Re: Position Of Sadness.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 05:11:35 PM AEST
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this is very intensly emotional and painful to read.. you got alot of feeling into this .. a beautiful written melody of ones sadness.. lovely work
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Position Of Sadness.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 11:36:38 AM AEST
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you have descibed an emotion and pain that is hard to bear and one that i have felt for a long time.
very good write. one of my favorites so far.
Ravyn |
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