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YOur love went away.
Contributed by
BRIDGI
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Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 12:52:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Raining in my heart,
Bleeding tears,
What caused all of this?
After all thes years,
All the love and all the care,
It all was great,
Untill of course.
That faitful day,
You said you loved me,
And allways will,
You said that you thought,
This love was real,
But after the years you love started to changed,
Your love for me just wasnt the same,
It was more like a friend,
Not the girl of your dreams,
My heart stopped that instant,
I didnt want to be alive,
I really thought I was the love of your life,
I tried to go on living,
But things just werent the same,
I dont know why,
But I took the blame,
I died that night,
My spirit and all,
The funnt thing is,
I missed you call,
To say that you want me back,
And to say that you care,
Mabey I would still be alive,
If I decided to live in dispair..........
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BRIDGI
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2008-03-02 12:52:43]
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Re: YOur love went away.
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 01:57:49 PM AEST
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My friend, a beautiful presentation of painful emotion and rejection. I could very well feel the pinch of it in very verse, but at the end a certain hope of life...to say life can't end with a broken heart...
Wonderful indeed.
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FRANCO. |
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Re: YOur love went away.
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by Oceandreamer on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 10:33:13 PM AEST
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I can sense your hurt within this write.
Emotional,sad and deep...
A poem with "heart"...
... how you "died" the night that love died.
I also sense that you don't take love lightly,
and your intense disappointment
when you realized that your partners
love had change..
Very well expressed and heartfelt...
Thanks for sharing.
Hang in there,
everything will work out for you in the end..
~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: YOur love went away.
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by althea_kendry on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 03:41:01 AM AEST
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once again tht was AMAZING!!!
u r an excellent writer!
whomever tht guy is tht ddnt love u anymore well, it's his loss :)
i dnt no u but i can tell by ur writin tht ur an awesome girl :)
keep writing n never give up :)
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Re: YOur love went away.
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by caz2411 on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 03:27:16 AM AEST
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| thanks for the comment this poem realy touched me as i have been in the same boat but he left me for my best mate after saying im the only one for him great poem keep it up |
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