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Whispers And Confusion.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
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Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 03:53:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Peel off my skin Because I'm screaming Clawing from within Deep breaths I can get through this No I can't I can't explain The pain Deep breaths I'm shaking This happens everyday I'm breaking Will you help me... Somebody help me I can get through this No I can't You don't understand The sadness has taken command Trapped in a cage This pent up rage Frustration Just help me I'm so cold So alone It hurts so bad Everything I lost Was all I ever had Trying to convince myself I can be okay But deep down I know That I'm just withering away And anyday Might be my final mistake Pain coupled with fear I got an angel on one shoulder And the devil on the other Whispering in my ear One says that I'm gonna be okay The other one says todays the day To end it all I can get through this No I can't... Deep breaths I'm so confused... I'm so confused.
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Re: Whispers And Confusion.
(User Rating: 1 ) by mashley06 on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 05:07:41 AM AEST (User
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I really like it. The pain and anguish is so obvious. Great job |
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Re: Whispers And Confusion.
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 05:10:44 AM AEST (User
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this is a tragical masterpiece.. very passionate and deep feeling in sadness and extreme painful emotions.. you have written this well!! beautiful job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Whispers And Confusion.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Removed on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 05:58:41 AM AEST (User
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Have you gotten past it, or do you think feeling this is a normal occurance to experience agian and agian? i haven't a clue if it is normal. If it is normal i fear life to be more like a torturous death. When ever i find myself feeling that way i see how much i suck at life. How can other people be so happy and carefree? is it ignorance, or inner strength??? I do not know... I am confuzed as well.
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Re: Whispers And Confusion.
(User Rating: 1 ) by BornReckless on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 06:36:10 AM AEST (User
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You layed it down on this one!! but you always do. This poem is like...a thought inside of a thought...awesome. |
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Re: Whispers And Confusion.
(User Rating: 1 ) by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 05:47:54 AM AEST (User
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A piece I can completely relate to. I feel you in this as much as I feel my own pain in my heart.
Peace
~Shannon |
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