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What Rules a Fool?
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 04:03:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Trust is the hand allowed to hold the heart captive and secure.
Desire and Respect are the lips which I beg to kiss me.
The kiss should land upon the collarbone perched fragile o'er the heart.
The heart that's torn itself between Emotion and the brain.
The brain that's always thinking second thoughts and even thirds.
Minor thirds whose chords are dissonant- a harmony that hurts.
The hurt comprised of Guilt- apply the blame upon the brain.
The heart is stronger stretched apart than Insecurity's brain.
But the body might be weaker than the fight between both speakers.
For Lust but rhymes with Trust with no connection 'tween their name.
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liquidsunshine
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2008-03-04 04:03:59]
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Re: What Rules a Fool?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 05:14:13 AM AEST
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this is very short but full of expression and passion. a powerful lil poem.. I think i know what you mean. (i could be wrong lolz but i think i know what this is about) this is very well written. I enjoyed it alot.
rock on,
vampyress Jenni
ps. glad to see you writing again |
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Re: What Rules a Fool?
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by PoeticHybrid on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 10:08:42 AM AEST
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| A lot was said in those few lines. Very well done. I loved the last line. |
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Re: What Rules a Fool?
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 12:46:23 AM AEST
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You packed a lot into this piece, without wasting a word
Nice work
Steve |
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