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Truth
Contributed by
rawjer
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Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 02:46:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Truth within a lie
justified without knowing why?
no care in this goodbye
hesitate, then you break down and cry
casually I'm crawling
forgive me for my calling
reactions all a stalling
for once again I'm falling
break of an embrace
this once again I face
complacent in this place
opposing this disgrace
in the net which you deceive
in the shadow that I grieve
is my soul I must retrieve
and the truth you must believe
Copyright ©
rawjer
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2008-03-04 14:46:04]
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Re: Truth
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 03:43:46 PM AEST
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Incredibly written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Truth
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by althea_kendry on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 03:22:22 AM AEST
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wow!
i reli like it
i can feel th emotion behind it which is awesome!
good job :) |
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