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HEART IS BROKEN
Contributed by
prabal77
on
Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 04:52:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Things i was about to say feelings to disclose,but hey never got a chance to ask expressing love is a difficult task now, heart is broken, (chorus) yeah, i am not all rite. my feelings are open, no, i can't survive...
scary facts,haunting past in front of them, this love won't last i am, like an abandoned house with all shattered glass now,winds have broken (chorus) this walls,they won't survive. all the doors are open, but my help,it's out of sight..
dreamt of you,all day and night you are an addiction,i wanna fight loosing you, is worst nightmare. my love and feelings,you don't care now dreams are broken (chorus) my soul is not alive this happens often, alone i break into cry..........
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Re: HEART IS BROKEN
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 05:01:27 PM AEST (User
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Good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: HEART IS BROKEN
(User Rating: 1 ) by constantlyme on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 04:23:59 AM AEST (User
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good poem. really liked it/
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Re: HEART IS BROKEN
(User Rating: 1 ) by Aysha on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 09:03:05 AM AEST (User
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I really really liked this!!! It totally hit homebase
Thanks
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