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My Regret
Contributed by
andrew13
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Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 11:56:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im not writing this to win you back
Im aware that youve moved on
To what will be a happy life,
Where I cant do you wrong
And I know that I have messed things up
And caused you so much pain
It breaks my heart, knowing its my fault,
Ill never hold you again
Instead Ill forever be there as your friend,
Of that you shouldnt worry.
But by writing this, while I cry alone at night,
Im comforted that you know Im sorry.
Copyright ©
andrew13
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2008-03-06 11:56:44]
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Re: My Regret
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by fielding88 on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 12:31:13 PM AEST
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| Nice first post, you paid attention to your rhyme scheme pretty well, sounded very cathartic overall. Welcome to YPDC, hope you enjoy your time around here :) |
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Re: My Regret
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by shelby on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 02:42:15 PM AEST
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Wonderful first write, I agree with fielding on this. Welcome to YPDC
Michelle |
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Re: My Regret
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by irodethetrain2u on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 03:12:40 PM AEST
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This poem speaks from the heart... it's how I feel right now. Thank you.
Keep up the writing! |
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Re: My Regret
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by mrpeanut64 on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 04:06:42 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. I now how you feel. I too have had to watch the one I love walk away in anothers arms. You feel your heart crumbling one cell at a time. |
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Re: My Regret
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by constantlyme on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 09:22:08 AM AEST
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Im new to this too, but that was a beautiful poem, 1st one or not. I hope you write more!
- Danielle |
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