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My Promise
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i am nothing more than nothing
i am such a ***** stain
all you give to me is happiness
all you get from me is pain
if pain were violence, i'd be your riot
if joy were stars i'd be your black hole
if nothing were something, i'd be everything
if comfort were warmth
you'd be so ***** cold
apologies, just empty mantras
nothing i do or say means *****
surrounded by smiles
they stretch out for miles
tried them all on, not one would fit
every stone i've thrown at the world
has built a ***** wall
i tear and claw but i cannot get out
i run in circles searching for an opening
i throw up blood, and then stand and shout
"i do not belong here
this cannot be right
i bled an ocean to drown myself in
and now i'm too weak to fight
can you hear my words now
mark them, everyone
ALL OF YOU WILL ***** PAY
FOR WHAT I HAVE BECOME"
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2003-03-11 12:30:00]
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Re: My Promise
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 02:58:31 PM AEST
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A very angry poem. I loved this I dont know what else to say. Hang in there buddy.
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: My Promise
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 03:33:59 PM AEST
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| i am so sad for the way you feel about yourself... apparently your wife loves you (i read another of your poems a while back about you and she), and the talent that you have for expressing your feelings is very strong and intense... keep writing it out... blessings... |
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Re: My Promise
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:32:56 PM AEST
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| AAHHH This was so touching I feel for you! Hang in there! Christina |
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Re: My Promise
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 12:38:03 PM AEST
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| oh wow...i love your poetry so much...and the last verse of this was amazing...i love it... |
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