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The one that fuels my cries
Contributed by
constantlyme
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Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 08:14:42 AM in AEST
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Your crooked smile and dark green eyes
Are all I fear, All I despise
Your are the wolf in sheep’s disguise
You are the one that fuels my cries
Your hate so real and will so strong
Your always right and never and wrong
You are what made the nights so long
You are what made me not belong
Your gravelled voice you used to shout
Your roughened hands that push me out
You are what fills my mind with doubt
And still what I cant do without.
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Re: The one that fuels my cries
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by Scott on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 11:22:46 PM AEST
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That's some pretty nice rhyme for having been written out quickly. The repetition of "you are" gives it a great sense of rhythm and urgency of emotion (does that make sense?) Awesome write in any case.
PS. Thanks for commenting on my poem! |
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