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A place where beauty lives
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 08:18:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Through the eyes of love,
a place where beauty lives.
Itll hold you in its arms,
till forever fades away.
Its warmth
it embraces from afar.
No oceans too deep,
no skies to high,
no wall can keep us apart.
Love always has a reason,
to keep you breathing
breathing for a lifetime.
Take a walk with me,
theyll never find us
Come with me,
we could only loose our way.
Lets get lost in our own world
our world filled with love.
Well find our way,
even fairytale have an end.
Through the eyes of love,
a place where beauty lives.
If this isnt perfect,
then what is love?
If this love isnt right,
I dont want to know right from wrong.
If this loves a crime,
Im guilty as sin.
If this isnt right,
then what are we feeling?
If we are not high on love,
why are we touching the ceiling?
If this isnt real,
I choose not to wake from this dream.
If this love isnt life,
what are we living for?
If this isnt happiness of tomorrow,
I choose to stay in this moment with you.
If this love brings sadness and tears,
leave me to drown in this ocean of love.
If this isnt everything,
Id rather have nothing
nothing at all.
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Oceandreamer
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2008-03-07 08:18:41]
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Re: A place where beauty lives
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 10:05:36 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written, emotional and expressive. I enjoyed the repetition of the word "if" throughout, it had a good effect on the overall product. Nice job. |
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Re: A place where beauty lives
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 06:46:24 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking and sweet.
Huggs,
emy |
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