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sounds
Contributed by
redwest802
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Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 07:26:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Sounds
Suburban sounds pervade your mind.
Driving crazed thoughts insane,
As you try to escape the sanity,
That hides twixt Psychopathic, maniacal ways.
Leading you on a path,
To your demise,
As a member of this scourge on earth known as humanity.
Copyright ©
redwest802
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2008-03-07 19:26:20]
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Re: sounds
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by SilverRain on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 08:14:16 PM AEST
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| Can read your frustrasion in this piece. Well written. |
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Re: sounds
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by shelby on
Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 10:16:21 AM AEST
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Nothing worse than having it so noisy it messes with your sleep lol....... I have lived where there was no noise at all too and first couple nights it got to me cause I was not used to it being quiet lol....
Made a huge impact with a short verse here made me think of lots of things reading this.
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