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Embarrassing little sister.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 02:26:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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You wanted to take your hard core drugs.
It didnt matter I was in the room.
I was only 15 the first time it happened.
It didnt matter I was in front of you.
You wanted to snort and you wanted to drink.
With your hard core friends that are mean.
You wanted to talk about fights to make yourself cool.
You wanted to swallow your pills that werent clean.
You wanted me involved.
You wanted me there.
I was 16.
When someone almost died in front of me.
... But you didnt care!
You said theres no harm in using.
No harm at all.
Looking back now,
I guess you thought you were so cool!
You wanted me involved.
So you gave me some drugs.
You didnt care.
I wasnt old enough.
I took some stuff,
But you wanted me to take more.
I felt so pressured,
Remembering that guy on the floor.
But I hadnt taken as much as him,
So I guess I couldnt see the harm...
My heart rate zoomed up.
Like my chest would explode.
I couldnt breathe.
Peoples eyes were cold.
My body went numb.
And the room went blurred.
I fell to the ground.
And then sounds dispersed.
I was dangerously ill.
You were annoyed.
But it wasnt because.
I almost died.
It was because you looked bad,
In front of your friends.
You didnt care about me.
But you never did.
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Re: Embarrassing little sister.
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by elle on
Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 05:22:35 AM AEST
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| thank you for sharing such an intimate glimpse. I must emphasize the relative balance of accountability to blame. at any tender age, we may be impressionable but at the same time why participate in something you already clearly have such a negative message about & a distinct distaste for. many times, in life we are confronted with exactly what we do not want to be. peace. elle. |
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Re: Embarrassing little sister.
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by shelby on
Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 03:45:58 PM AEST
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It is good to write about these feelings and release your soul from the resentment....... Touching write.
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Re: Embarrassing little sister.
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by juliestevens18 on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 07:41:21 AM AEST
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| Great Poem.. really inspiring.. you can feel the pain and resentment you have for your sister.. be sure to check out my poems! thanks |
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Re: Embarrassing little sister.
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by Jo16 on
Tuesday, 6th May 2008 @ 03:17:58 PM AEST
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| Good Poem. I Can Feel The Anger .. |
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Re: Embarrassing little sister.
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by Inevitable on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 10:55:36 PM AEST
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| It's sad that you had such a negative experience with drugs. There are good drugs out there, just so you know. Abuse is negative in any form, not just with drugs. |
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Re: Embarrassing little sister.
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by Nicole_Rahaman75 on
Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 11:16:07 AM AEST
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this is graphic! Its a great poem Rosie.. Great illustration of something that was the cause of a lot of the pain in your life!
Sweetie you have an amazing talent wrapped up in your brain and the wrongs in your life has obviously been the inspiration for such. Dont ever stop writing! I hope we can reconnect soon!
Nicki |
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