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Condemned Creation
Contributed by
Lady_Daisy
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Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 04:01:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As still as the winter's day she lays
pale and withered as she descends
into her solemn and condemned creation
that of which is her mind.
Allow rain to fall on the clad body
suppose the rain to be her feelings
no four leaf clover in her palm
a shadow of pain for the witch.
LD
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Lady_Daisy
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2008-03-09 16:01:46]
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Re: Condemned Creation
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 04:15:48 PM AEST
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This was dark indeed. A little mysterious as well. I liked it. Well written.
Take care
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Re: Condemned Creation
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by Lady_Daisy on
Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 04:32:17 PM AEST
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| Thanks, I haven't written poetry for ages if you look into some of my other work you will see, lol. |
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Re: Condemned Creation
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by shelby on
Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 04:54:04 PM AEST
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I agree with Christina here and I love the mysterious undertones in it......... as still as the winters day she lays that opens so solid I feel it
Michelle |
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