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Memories of you
Contributed by
Crimsonflame
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Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 09:56:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The one with the crinkled eyes,
The one with the perfect smile,
The one for whom the sun rise,
The one for whom girls run miles.
Shadowed lights over your hand,
Gracefully clasped over the wheel,
Confident and always with a plan,
Gentle and yet as tough as steel.
Red flowers you placed on my lap,
From where its sweet scent,
Drifted from its dewy sap,
Beautiful, simple, luminiscent.
The way you flip your hair,
Your calm, assuring voice,
How you would always stare,
And how much you loved ice.
The times we did not held hands,
Stayed with me like you did,
But even though we never danced,
My heart you broke like a reed.
The one who I love dearly,
The only one who makes my day,
The one who I miss sorely,
And the only one who i treasure always.
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Crimsonflame
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2008-03-09 21:56:01]
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Re: Memories of you
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by amandajanesmith on
Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 11:39:10 PM AEST
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Hi your poem was very enjoyable to read.
When you said you havent done any poems for a bit, well keep going your work is good. |
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Re: Memories of you
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 05:35:00 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem for remembrance.
Well written and filled with love and emotions.
Take care and keep writing
Christina |
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