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To my grave
Contributed by
karen65
on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 08:40:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The hidden moon
breaks away
Reveal in crimson red
As my life bled
Its last droplet of blood
Fills me in a rush
Both fear and ecstasy
He took my lips
I could not resist
As the moon sinks
Into its earthy grave
I said goodbye
to my last sunrise
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karen65
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2008-03-11 20:40:58]
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Re: To my grave
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th March 2008 @ 12:18:13 AM AEST
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Karen, where have you been chick??
I see your dark romantic poetry has not left you. This is good. :)This
site was missing it. .. and missing you.
A shorter piece for you, but still with the
impact of a more wordy piece.
*hugs*
~Breezy
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Re: To my grave
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 12th March 2008 @ 04:23:51 AM AEST
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wow this is dark and romantic .. beautiful flow to this.. a short yet passionate and powerful lil poem.. great job
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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Re: To my grave
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by broken_cookie on
Wednesday, 12th March 2008 @ 12:22:42 PM AEST
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| poems dont always have to long to be good. this prooves it, to have gone on would have been overkill. this is great. |
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Re: To my grave
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 05:01:32 AM AEST
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You have such a way of romanticizing the dark.
Hope to see more from you soon!! |
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Re: To my grave
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by Loende on
Monday, 8th December 2008 @ 10:27:39 PM AEST
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Mmmm...that was so delightful. I really adore your canvas. Personally I think that the dark inspires us more than we might think. Great job!! Thank you for the post.
Be well,
Loende |
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