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The Runner
Contributed by
razoredbabe
on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 04:52:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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God you're so beautiful,if
you could be mine,
but usually you just dont have time,
for the things that really matter,
and the weight of this all is just making me sadder,
beautiful boy please come out from inside,that house which holds all the beauty that's died,
don't you see you how i see you?
or see nothing at all, and
your apathy breaks my heart,
and i can't tear down your wall,
and maybe you think that i
can't catch you if you fall,
but i'm not allowed, no one is,
and i guess i failed,cause i couldn't get in, and
the way you love is simple
and true, but i just can't look anymore for you,
wanting it all, even two, eyes of brown, not blue,
you had the magic that started to mend,so
my world started to fade with you,
thought i found my heart in a friend, and
beautiful boy i wanted it all, but you're
always ten miles to just my one,and there's no winner at the end of your run....and the tears have dried,waiting,for your call.
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razoredbabe
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2008-03-15 16:52:14]
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Re: The Runner
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 07:04:41 AM AEST
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this is a very sad write.. its a good expression of losing someone to something or someone else..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: The Runner
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 10:58:32 AM AEST
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| Such a lovely write ..God Bless |
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Re: The Runner
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by lost_again on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 03:41:36 PM AEST
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| I liked the ending, entire write pretty good. Way sad though. |
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