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Dear God
Contributed by
jazzyfizzle
on
Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 08:29:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
PetPoems
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Dear god, you took my dog away
And I just wish that I knew why
You knew that my whole world would crash
Maybe you just like to watch me cry
You knew that this would hurt me
Yet you still sit and play this game
You and me both know inside
That without her, ill never be the same
All those times you've let me down
I always forgave you in the end
But this time there's no going back
You took my heart and my bestfriend
Its been over a week now
I can't take the sadness anymore
I still get so excited
When I walk in through the door
But she's not there for me to see
She's not there to lay down in my bed
She's not there for when I try to sleep
And make me play with her instead
God..can't you just give her back?
I won't ask for favors anymore
I still just don't understand
Why it is you want to hurt me for?
I know I've done some wrong things
And some things that I regret
But I asked for your forgivness
I thought we all could just forget
My life was just so perfect
I was happy and everything was good
But then you went and ruined it
I can't imagine why you would?
So now all that I'm asking
Is for you to give her back to me
Otherwise ill do something stupid
And it'll be just for you to see
For now my faith in you is gone
But you can put it back on track
I want to have my faith in you again
So please just give my doggy back.
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Re: Dear God
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by Ty6687 on
Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 11:14:18 AM AEST
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| I am sorry for your loss and I know it is hard, but God doesnt want to see you cry. God loves you more than you could every imagine. i am praying for you and if this poem is true. If you do keep your faith in Him, He will help you through. God bless you |
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Re: Dear God
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by emystar on
Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 12:10:38 PM AEST
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Great writing but very sad.the God I serve jus wants your luv.
I agree with the other comment.
Keep writing.
huggs, prayer,
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Re: Dear God
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by jesusofholland on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 01:30:46 PM AEST
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| Gosh, this is so sad, but I thought it was very well done. I truly felt your struggle. Losing a loved one is the hardest thing we will ever go through in so many different ways. I hope you've healed your broken heart and faith. |
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