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Our own sins
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 08:38:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Soulscapes and landslides
there are days when you shut down and cry
Waters run dry
crashing of emotional walls begin
no one should point any fingers
we all have our own sin
vampyress Jenni
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Re: Our own sins
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 10:29:04 AM AEST
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Jen this is so solid! Awesome job here. How true the words how true...
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Re: Our own sins
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:54:28 PM AEST
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| very good! |
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Re: Our own sins
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:55:31 PM AEST
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good point
no one should point fingers at anyone for anything except them selves |
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Re: Our own sins
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by emystar on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 06:40:05 PM AEST
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Short but very powerfull and so true.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Our own sins
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by Keisha on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 10:58:23 PM AEST
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Straight to the point, good job.
Peace be with you.
Keisha |
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Re: Our own sins
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th March 2008 @ 01:50:12 AM AEST
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Compelling tittle, along with a most revealing meaning behind it. definately true, great write as always your style conveys . . .
Ben |
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Re: Our own sins
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 12:33:13 PM AEST
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Oh Jenni, I SO loved this! There are many I'd love to point in the
direction of this piece. Truly! Wisdom in a few short words, hun.
And so wonderfully expressed. Thank you for this. It's exquisite!
~Breezy |
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Re: Our own sins
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 05:28:51 AM AEST
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great message, excellent write:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Our own sins
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by Spike on
Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 10:13:04 PM AEST
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True, we all have our darkness and imperfections and we should be careful what (and who) we criticize. Nicely done.
S. |
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Re: Our own sins
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 03:18:12 AM AEST
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Short and powerful.. Well written..
Jenni |
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Re: Our own sins
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by ratty on
Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 05:57:37 AM AEST
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Love the 2 closing lines........
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Re: Our own sins
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by wheels on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:05:27 PM AEST
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I really like your style. Very clever and well written.
--Kevin
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Re: Our own sins
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 02:00:00 PM AEST
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Wow... An Awesome write!
Much enjoyed reading it!
Thanks.
~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: Our own sins
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by Muinanyere on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:05:37 PM AEST
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| so true, I like it's shortness though :) |
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