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Thoughts of Insomnia
Contributed by
Poetic_punk
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Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 12:35:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Seized by the first light of day
How long since dusk i can not say
Through hazy eyes my mind greets the dawn
And thoughts from the dark Within leave me torn
Living in two worlds sketched out by insomnia
The smoke rises from my day in lines so linea
Will this dividing blur into only a memory
Or will i continue to fill in the pages of this story
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Poetic_punk
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2008-03-21 12:35:08]
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Re: Thoughts of Insomnia
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:03:07 PM AEST
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I relate to this. Great job bringing it to light. I love the night and the stillness but when I need to sleep and cannot do it yes this is very real.
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Re: Thoughts of Insomnia
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by MakeShift_2134 on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:05:18 PM AEST
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Short but complete. Great work. Keep it up.
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Re: Thoughts of Insomnia
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by Keisha on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:15:48 PM AEST
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| I like this poem it's almost just the starting of what your brain goes through in sleep depravation, good job, Keep writting. |
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Re: Thoughts of Insomnia
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 04:25:34 PM AEST
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| fantastic write! |
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