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I Am...
Contributed by
Tanna
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Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
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I am unrelenting, like a moth to a flame
I am the anger which you cannot tame
I am the beauty of a withering rose
I am the look of one who knows
I am the melody of a songless bird
I am the voice never to be heard
I am the eyes of a homeless child
I am the body of innocence defiled
I am the gloom of the night as it falls
I am the echo through the empty halls
I am the scars that illness leaves
I am the wind as it moans through the eaves
I am the cause of all your tears
I am the metalic taste of fears
I am the hunger, a driving need
I am the Reaper as you lay there and bleed
I am the migraine that twists you apart
I am the knife burried deep in your heart
I am the sorrow, harbored inside
I am the disappointment you've tried to hide
I am the freak tormented by fate
I am the one for which it's to late
I am the calm before the storm
I am the demon in angelic form
I am the faith in which you have lost
I am the vessel on the ocean tossed
I am the one you thought you knew
I am the secret which hides in full view
I am the bitterness of living a lie
I am the soul who begs to die
I am haunted, growing weary with time
I am tainted, I am sublime.
Copyright ©
Tanna
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2003-03-11 21:20:00]
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Re: I Am...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 10:44:37 PM AEST
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I am......IMPRESSED!
Great job!!
Angel always...Godspeed O:-) |
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Re: I Am...
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:54:45 PM AEST
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I liked this a lot of your thoughts & feelings in this! Some of the lines I could relate!Good!
Christina |
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Re: I Am...
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 12:20:40 AM AEST
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| Mmmm ... lots of stormy feelings in there Tanna .. I can relate to nearly all of them!!! Chilly! Great write ... Jan |
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Re: I Am...
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by gina on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 05:14:03 AM AEST
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I am also impressed ,especially by those lines :"I am the calm before the storm
I am the demon in angelic form "
gr8 write......
GINA |
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Re: I Am...
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by riverofwords on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 07:37:38 AM AEST
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what a contrast of light and shade , positive and negative
a flourish of concepts ..deep yet very true
awesome write ...well done tanna
peace be your journey
terry
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Re: I Am...
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by FLTulip on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 12:34:59 PM AEST
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| Very well written! I really enjoyed reading this. |
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Re: I Am...
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by Korax on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 09:02:09 AM AEST
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| Amazing words.......;) |
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Re: I Am...
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by Demon42069 on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 12:38:34 AM AEST
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outstanding vocab, very vibrant, very vivid, great piece of work...
Tony |
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