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Breathless Kiss
Contributed by
Marrs
on
Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 05:35:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Oh so breathless this pain is totally endless Oh baby look at me, tell me how do you see me How do you bare to look at me Body painted with bruises and scars A ***** with no heart Keep on looking at the ***** you found Look in my eyes, quit staring at the ground Is it really all that bad now Just let me kiss you endlessly Oh just let me leave you breathelessly Cmon sweet thing of mine, lets end this loving tonight Oh yeah well these scars, they are all your fault So take a good look and see, just how pathetic you could make me be See the weakness in me Dont play this off You know I know you better than anyone else I know those lies just as well You think you are pulling me me under again And maybe you are baby But you dont bear these scars, take my hand watch it closely As I take yours in mine, mm baby lets play this game Just one more time I will show you mine, if I can give you yours By that I mean, these razorblade scars of course Why do you look at me that way darling Oh please the sting wont last long, If I can handle it Then why cant you Maybe its because I have nothing to lose But then at this point, neither do you Look at those tears, what is it now Its like you havent seen me in years No I dont want this, I cant take it How about we get rid of it Oh dear what a mess we have here You didnt expect that did you Neither did I but that didnt mean I didnt try Ah see you messed me up Lost me in a word, oh yeah well you called it love But all I heard you scream was slut This isnt all, dont you dare turn away again You are going to see the damage you did Here is one from the first time it happened, right here across my arm And heres the last one just personally carved, right across your neck Oh baby, how do you see me now This gets to be our last kiss, mm our love ends in death See I knew Id leave you breathless
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Re: Breathless Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by a7x36 on
Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 07:00:51 PM AEST (User
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i never thought i'd be able to enjoy a cutting poem, but you did a great job with flow and style. i felt like i was right there in the moment. |
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Re: Breathless Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by BRIDGI on
Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 12:48:04 AM AEST (User
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Wow...i love this poem..the way you went about it...like the emotion..i really enjoyed reading it...
BRidgette |
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