|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Candlelit Secrets
Contributed by
marie
on
Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 05:35:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
The flame, it consumes me.
I'm entranced by it's beauty.
it's warm tongues surround me.
I feel safe, secure.
It burns away the pain and sorrow,
Whipping them into smoke.
So that no one need know
Of this inner struggle.
They don't understand
So I hold back the tears.
I feel so alone.
Like a candle in the dark.
Whose flame is growing fainter,
Until one day...
It's gone.
Copyright ©
marie
... [
2008-03-25 17:35:42]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Candlelit Secrets
(User Rating: 1 )
by Marrs on
Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 05:42:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I like it alright, but it starts out stronger than it finished out. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
