|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Tormented Children
Contributed by
TenorTaylor09
on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
A tormented child`s mind,
is a very interesting place.
Filled with tormoil,fear,
dread,and disgrace.
The best thing is,
the lacking of hapiness.
For that there is
no maintaing space.
To hear their cackle,
to hear their cry,
is like
music to my ears,
like
beauty to my eyes.
Their quirt and evil
but mentally insane.
They scream and they shout
for it`s revenge
they wish to gain.
To be set free
is their one true wish,
but to get help,
is a miracle,
waiting for it`s place.
Their main goal
is to cause
torment and woe
beware for every
cheerful soul
is their foe.
Their come out
at night
but do not dwell in
the day.
But don`t worry because
sooner or later
everyone will pay.
HAHAHAHAHAHA
HAHAHAHAHAHA.
Copyright ©
TenorTaylor09
... [
2003-03-11 23:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Tormented Children
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:49:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Yes So true! Very good,I liked this peice!
Well done! Christina |
|
|
Re: Tormented Children
(User Rating: 1 )
by AVRIL on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 11:50:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
HEY THIS IS GOOD... NO ITS GREAT.... NO ITS WONDERFUL... NEWAYS... KEEP WRITING... HOPEFULLY WE CAN FINISH OUR NORMAL? POEM... :)
ALICIA |
|
|
Re: Tormented Children
(User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 09:24:46 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
good write ..i liked it a lot
peace be your journey
terry
|
|
|
Re: Tormented Children
(User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:33:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Taylor,
I too wrote a poem after seeing The Ring...quite a scary thing it is when someones mind has been so distorted...becuase of the hatred of others...great write...keep up the great writing...i cant wait to see what you have next...
Lindsey |
|
|
Re: Tormented Children
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 08:17:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| sounds like some people i know....hana |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
