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a wondrous creature
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
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a wondrous creature
this child, just three
how in the world was
she bestowed upon me?
wake up in the morning
"mama, i'm hungry"
beautiful blue eyes
search my soul; they find me
we rise from our slumber
this toddler and me
kisses and hugs
more comfort, you see
"please read me a book"
my daughter, she pleads
porcelain skin, like her mom
makes my heart bleed
a genius, this little one
her mind like a fox
amuses herself
be it a crayon or a box
twilight, it approaches
much to my dismay
my angel, she says
"mommy, have a nice day!"
off to work i go
thoughts of my love in my head
my precious little audrey
daddy tucks her into bed
in through the door
i see her sleeping
my beautiful baby
my heart just keeps weeping
i miss my baby
want all time spent with her
this beautiful child
my precocious little daughter
i'll be here, my baby
when you do awake
and into my arms
you i shall take...
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LadyDama
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Re: a wondrous creature
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by AngryPrincess on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 12:39:43 AM AEST
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wow, Lady...that takes my breath away. I'M SO JEALOUS! its good to know that there are people like you who cherish what you have, someone so precious and new, without a care in the world, so free. She is very lucky to have a mother like you. :O)
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Re: a wondrous creature
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 01:48:45 AM AEST
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| I agree with Lindsey ... and these feelings I can relate to very well ... children are precious ... great write... Jan |
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Re: a wondrous creature
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 02:50:45 AM AEST
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| aww! this is an excellent write. portrayed well, the baby and its mother stand in our memory. beautifully done, cheers for this poem. venkat |
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Re: a wondrous creature
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 05:41:05 AM AEST
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This got to me, fore I love my little girl to, most beauitiful. I love it.
The Phantom |
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Re: a wondrous creature
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 10:05:54 AM AEST
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AAHH I liked this peice well done !
I can relate even if I have boys!
Great write! Christina |
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