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Coach Solomon's Dance of Life
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 03:08:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Coach Solomon's "Dance of Life"
All you gots
this one shot, son.
Aint no such thang
as second chance.
It aint even bout
th steps you make,
what matters most is
Howd you dance?
Ya see, life z
like a ballroom,
an th floor
its always full,
butcha caint jus sway
long with th others,
ya gotta feel
th musics pull.
Cuz th tempos
always changin
an th rhythm,
whull, it does too.
n if yer jus goin
through the motions,
boy, n you aint
a dancin true.
Ya gotta kick em heels
up a bit,
an step lively
what evr th tune.
Doncha fall in line
like all th rest,
ya gotta spin round
swing, an swoon.
Don jus let
th music move ya,
grab hold tight
that melody,
an feed it through
them back beats,
every ounce
a yer energy.
An fore ya know it
youll soon find
th bandll be
afollowin you.
An when you dance
like no-ones watchin boy,
ats when
yer dancin
true.
Nazmythian
November 21, 2007
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Nazmythian
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Re: Coach Solomon's Dance of Life
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by iodinelove on
Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 04:12:53 PM AEST
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Very Nice
always, Abraham
(I'd say more, but I'm busy as usual, and I have to post at least one more comment) |
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Re: Coach Solomon's Dance of Life
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 04:49:34 AM AEST
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this is a very different approach to an insightful write on younger days in life.. I especially love the ending.. very well done
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Coach Solomon's Dance of Life
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 13th March 2013 @ 02:21:01 PM AEST
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| as one who follows the music...I absolutely love this...a tune of its own allowing me the flow of the music...as if one is never right without the other..a grand write..simply smooth,directly instructional and correct. The rule of dance. Hugs ND |
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