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Day of Rebirth
Contributed by
alibof10
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Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 02:48:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A day where everythings gone
A day when I'm a son
A day where I say goodbye
And leave everything behind
My heart, my love, my everything
You are my oxygen, my heart beat, my living
I miss you more and more
My heart is beginning to lose its goal
You are my happiness, my smile, my pleasure
I love you baby, my goodbye wasnt a closure
Without you I'm no more than a stray being
A lost soul, a sad thing dying
You make me feel alive
You make me feel superior
For you I will survive
From you I am no longer with an empty interior
I never meant to say goodbye
And leave you with a tear in your eye
Its just a long see you later
I'm going to my creator
I will not die, make sure of that
For everyone, I care about
Ill be back, so hear me out
Hear e and have no doubts
I love you, always and forever
To think that I once said never
To a love that I now share with you
An idiot I was for sure
Take care my love
Take care and become my hope
Take care of yourself baby
Take care for you're my lady
Take care and you will be
Taking care of you and me
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alibof10
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2008-03-30 02:48:25]
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Re: Day of Rebirth
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by prabal77 on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 03:07:08 AM AEST
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lovely poem..and touchy..
huggs.... |
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Re: Day of Rebirth
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by whome on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 12:55:42 PM AEST
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| A touch repetitive but I still enjoyed it. Emotional and touching |
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