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Heavy Tides
Contributed by
Poetic_punk
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Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 12:16:37 PM in AEST
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From the place where sorrow hides
I hear a scream of pain and fear
Hold my hand until the sound subsides
It's a scream only I can hear
Such a noise could drag you under heavy tides
in time I'm sure you may come to care
With such a hollow sounding crash
This thing inside tears right through me
It blinds me from the world with a flash
all my lost friends I long to see
As i blindly charge and slash
Oh if only i could be set free
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2008-03-31 12:16:37]
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Re: Heavy Tides
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by ZiggyB on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 10:14:42 PM AEST
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| Seems to get right to the point. Pretty good write. |
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Re: Heavy Tides
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by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 03:20:56 AM AEST
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| Very nice write~~~God Bless~~ |
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