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For Me These Days
Contributed by
Ari
on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 02:06:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sifting through the
Subconscious mind
Looking for the right word
At the right time
No way to describe
What your feeling
Hardships all around
But your dealing
And thats life
Thats life for you
Whatever happened
To being care free
When I was young
Nothing troubled me
Now standing up
In front of a crowd
I better be funny
I better be loud
And if I am not
Please forgive me
I apologize
In advance
And I guess thats life
For me these days
So much for to be happy
But I want that one
That one smile
Those two eyes
That can look into mine
And tell me its alright
And I know its alright
But I guess thats life
For me
These days
Copyright ©
Ari
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2008-03-31 14:06:18]
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Re: For Me These Days
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 03:45:40 PM AEST
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Well it turned out right no matter. I can certainly relate to this awesome write.
Well done.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: For Me These Days
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 04:46:00 PM AEST
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well done
always, abraham |
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Re: For Me These Days
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by a7x36 on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 04:53:20 PM AEST
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structure blows, but ur rhymes weren't forced and sounded good.
why not still be care free? it's more than possible |
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