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Legacy
Contributed by
LoveStruck_Hippie
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Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 03:27:03 AM in AEST
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Inside I rage
My voice longs to scream out
But at each turn it is silenced
Silenced by fear
My heart aches
My soul bare and bleeding
Wishing
Wanting you to pull me near
But
Your touch all too often
Cold and Empty
A temporary fix
To what pains me
In the depths of all that I am
I am ALONE
Forever rejected by your heart
The world has grown cold and dark
I have begun to wish for death
An end to the pain I feel inside
An end to the hollow space
Where my heart was once filled
With joy, hope and love
It beat endlessly for you and you alone
My love undying, eternal
Now lay in the wasteland of your lies
Beaten and broken
It dies a little more each day
My will to live dying
With each faltering beat
As my blood spills out
From carefully crafted lacerations
Fashioned to empty all hopes and dreams
To drain a devoted soul of all its light
This my love is your
Legacy!
Shannon Musser
April 1, 2008
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Re: Legacy
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by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 03:40:51 AM AEST
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| This is so beautiful~~Well written my dear friend~~Life is Beautiful~~God Bless!! |
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Re: Legacy
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 06:14:54 AM AEST
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Now hippy, I'm a 1980's late bloomer hippy,
Now friend,
I can say I remember feelin this way 'bout the time I met my ole hippy that has passed on.
My hippy picked my up and gave me a hand and pointed me to new horizens.
Some where in there I found my will to live in my writing.
Peace out friend and know that I'm jus a pm away.
God bless you-n-yours.
big luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace, will 2 keep on keepin on.
emy
I luv your work and i cried if you got your wish. |
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Re: Legacy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 09:23:28 AM AEST
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Wow, that is incredibly sad. You definitely make me feel the pain. Great writing, Shannon....and scary. Yes, the dark parts are sad and frightening...especially losing the will to live. :-(
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Re: Legacy
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 09:31:39 AM AEST
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This made me cry I wish there was something I can do.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Legacy
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by AnenaLynne on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 12:29:40 PM AEST
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sigh..i read and then re-read your poem 3 times and each time it just became more magnificant to me. just the flow and rythem of it was top notch and i wont even start on the word choice and subject matter. simply awesome, thanks so much.
~nena |
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Re: Legacy
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by whome on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 02:04:22 PM AEST
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So painfull! So Shattering! So Devestating! So beautifully and emotionally written.
From the ashes of Love, there Love springs anew.
So Look to the future and Glory in a new love found. |
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Re: Legacy
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by ZiggyB on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 11:25:38 PM AEST
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| Very sad. Excellent writing. |
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Re: Legacy
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 03:19:09 PM AEST
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excellent expression of feelings....
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Legacy
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 08:09:23 PM AEST
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Sometimes the best writes come from the worst feelings, though that is little compensation for the pain. Raw, angry and beautiful.
Spike |
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Re: Legacy
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th April 2008 @ 01:46:22 PM AEST
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Sorry for your pain, this is an intense peice
every word is an emotion crying and screaming at the same time, hope you
feel better soon . . .
Ben |
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Re: Legacy
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 02:52:34 AM AEST
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A very pain filled write.
I hope things get better soon. |
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Re: Legacy
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by wheels on
Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 01:27:39 AM AEST
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I love your poem, its meter and style. it was beautiful and unfortunately how I feel right now - seems as tho death may not come soon enough.
You are a beautiful writer |
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Re: Legacy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 12:19:55 PM AEST
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It's amazing that something inside you can be so beautiful
Yet we need that special someone to complete us
this was a true to life write
for all your words struck nerves to make me know I'm alive
simply splendid
-D.Truth |
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