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The Disgrace of Love
Contributed by
dreamer_4_eternity
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Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 04:01:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As much as I wish I could be with you I understand that it's a wish that won't be coming true
A heart, a hand, a smile to share I don't expect you to show me you care
For I lost you once, I can do it again It doesn't matter how long it's been
People see me with a tear-stained face Funny how something as good as love can disgrace
I know that you left and you aren't coming back These words I send to you are not an attack
Merely a way to get this fact through my mind I'm no longer yours, and you're no longer mind.
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2008-04-02 04:01:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Disgrace of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 04:31:35 AM AEST (User
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Excellent write~~Kinda sad to me been disgrace by love~~
God Bless!!
Good Write~~ |
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Re: The Disgrace of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by dreamer_4_eternity on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 06:40:50 AM AEST (User
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oh my, typo! Last word of the poem should be "mine" not mind! Excuse me! You know it's a wonder if my head wasn't screwed on... |
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Re: The Disgrace of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by ZiggyB on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 09:20:25 PM AEST (User
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Pretty good really. Always read plenty before submitting. (spelling) |
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