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I Will Change
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 06:09:28 AM in AEST
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this is from my English class we had to make a change poem we could have made it up but I choose to keep mine real and i think it turned out good i hope you like it
I was getting miserable over time.
I remember when it all started when my grandmother died.
I heard when we found out she had little time.
I saw my brother when he busted open his head.
I worried that everyone around me would be dead.
I thought that my misery would take over in time.
But, I want to change.
I am who I am which is nothing in my head.
I think it is full of false hope as we are at war and send people out just to be dead.
I need to get over this and clear my head.
I try so hard to clear my mind.
I feel like I'll complete nothing until I'm dead.
I forgive my dad for all he's not done, even when I was young never tucked me in to bed.
Now I can change.
I will get over this and be a better person.
I choose to finally take control of my life.
I dream that I can change over time.
I hope that this misery will leave my mind.
I predict that I will change over time.
I know that I've made up my mind.
I will change.
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Re: I Will Change
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 08:02:25 PM AEST
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Well, I certainlly hope you got the highest grade possible with this powerfull masterpeice and wisdom.
I luv it Kelly.
Awesome!
Big luv, smiles, huggs,
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