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Creeping Blue
Contributed by
Poetic_punk
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Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 09:28:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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The creeping blue of the dark but moving night
A thoughtful shadow that creeps across the wall
Things that drift on a timeless journey to the light
My eyes ramble over the light at the darks downfall
So now the sun rises in the sky and spread across my face
The moon has gone and the birds sing their songs of day
Fingers of light across my room and the shadows leave no trace
And now I rise with no sleep but still from this time my mind will stray
Now the day draws to its close and it is time to head to bed
As I try to find a scrap of sleep I need to let things be
But my mind is occupied and I can't get these thoughts out of my head
The creeping blue is back again and covers everything I see.
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2008-04-02 09:28:15]
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Re: Creeping Blue
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 10:58:14 AM AEST
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This write describes so well what I went through many nights. Thoughts and words flying through my head so I could not sleep. Keep the pen and paper close. You will get some amazing works if you jot your thoughts down at the time. Enjoyed the read.
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Re: Creeping Blue
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by a7x36 on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 05:38:05 PM AEST
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| a somewhat chilling account of dusk |
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