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so here i am...
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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so here i am
tired, lazy
here you are
asking me
i am something you will never know
like the feelings i hate to show
a lot more lonely than before
and yet im
calm, comfortable
why?
this mortal body
i feel trapped in too many moments of the day
how i long to get away
this feeling gets old
but then again its reassuring
cause its all i've ever known
can you not help me?
can you not save me?
let this anger out through pain
bleed my tears like they were rain
and yet i find the time to laugh
i guess im really not that sad.
im so lost i dont even know what im saying.
end.
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Re: so here i am...
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by gina on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:27:28 AM AEST
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i dont think anything worse can happen to me today , so i took the chance and read it :P
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Re: so here i am...
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 05:39:28 AM AEST
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That's like telling somebody not to think of pink elephants. All they can think about is pink elephants!!! Of course I read it. It's a good tactic. It's working for you. Mr smarty pants, using reverse psychology or something of the sorts to get your poem read... geez, why didn't I think of that???
Good poem by the way :)
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Re: so here i am...
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 07:23:34 PM AEST
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"let this anger out through pain
bleed my tears like they were rain
and yet i find the time to laugh
i guess im really not that sad." <---- loved that part....
Very good write David... and I love the author's note!! lol :)
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