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Not Okay
Contributed by
Bubbles02
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Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 09:39:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Don't even know what to say.
I'm not okay.
My best friend is now the blade.
It makes the pain fade.
You hurt me so badly
and cutting is the only thing that helps sadly.
I want to cry--
for smiling would just be a lie.
I'm not happy
because my pain, you cannot see.
And even if you did, would you care?
God, how this isn't fair.
I gave you my all,
hoping you'd catch me if I fall.
But you didn't--you let me drop
and I no longer have the strength to fight back up to the top.
Copyright ©
Bubbles02
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2008-04-03 09:39:02]
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Re: Not Okay
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 09:55:52 AM AEST
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| AWE! i loved you're write first off. its straight to the point and i can tell its tough;i've been through the whole "cutting" thing and its not any fun.However, youll fight through it, you may be suffering now, but things will get better, if they could for me im sure they will for you also.best wishes. if you need anything message me, im always there to talk |
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Re: Not Okay
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by MajesticPoet on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 10:48:10 AM AEST
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Nice write. Life sucks. SOmetimes though it is the ones you think dont care turn out to be the ones that care the most...
MaJ |
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Re: Not Okay
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 11:21:27 AM AEST
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I care so please stop.
You must learn to luv yourself.
I want say I luv the write because it's very sad but I will say you are a really good writer.
Hugg, luv, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Not Okay
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by PreciousKitten on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 12:12:09 AM AEST
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| i love how you express yourself in this poem, because, i, too, felt this way once upon a time. and that's when i learned to be careful to who i was with and what i was doing with them. |
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Re: Not Okay
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by Ty6687 on
Saturday, 5th April 2008 @ 05:34:11 AM AEST
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| If you place your faith in Christ he will not let you fall. Sometimes it seems tough and like no one is there but he will never leave your side. This is a very sad poem and i pray that this will not last long |
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