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Guilty As Charged
Contributed by
ravensofthedark
on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 01:42:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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These rhymes don't matter, so long as I'm here,
What does it all matter, with the running tear
Who will listen, who will care?
Is this living, the life i don't share,
Blood runs through my bones,
And this never condones,
Imprisoned within the confines of my mind,
Along the beaten path, I fall behind,
Though I'm allowed, to write, rhyme, and think
I can't escape the past, bound in chains, with the poison i drink,
The vengeance, the victim, the verdict, all seen in time,
With this darkness, isolation, setting in... I still rhyme...
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ravensofthedark
... [
2008-04-03 13:42:07]
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Re: Guilty As Charged
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 04:26:17 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry for the loss.
the God that I serves understands suicide.
You captured the subject well even though it's sad. I'm sure it will help ease the pain or at least they will understand in time.
keep up the work, friend.
Awesome writing as always.
Big ole huggs,
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Re: Guilty As Charged
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 09:18:15 AM AEST
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| I am so sorry to haer of your loss, This was a great tribute to your friend. My condolences to you! |
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