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Sitting On A Cloud
Contributed by
Ravensofthedark
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Saturday, 5th April 2008 @ 05:09:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Sitting alone,
Though the dark comes to show,
Terminal sorrow crows cold
Sitting here, growing old
Falling over with the final air gone
Like a trance, feeling so long
I lay in a casket, which is dark like the moonless night
A shroud seeps over me, the wings take flight
The journey in the sky, beautiful as the moon,
Looking far below, up here i loom
Sitting on this cloud, wondering one thing
Though it may be true, is it heaven or a dream
And here I sit, like a king!
Copyright ©
Ravensofthedark
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2008-04-05 17:09:20]
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Re: Sitting On A Cloud
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by DrogedaRain on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 03:09:35 AM AEST
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| Beautiful imagery~! And not to mention a beautiful write. Thank you for sharing~ =) |
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Re: Sitting On A Cloud
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 09:04:27 AM AEST
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| I love the imagery presented here... good write..Jenni_K |
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Re: Sitting On A Cloud
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 11:09:39 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem. the imagery just came alive for me. I really think youre a better poet than I! |
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Re: Sitting On A Cloud
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th April 2008 @ 04:24:59 PM AEST
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Awesomely written. Very thought provoking write.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: Sitting On A Cloud
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 11:04:32 AM AEST
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| I often feel like this too, perhaps we are sharing souls or spirits... anyway great poem!!! |
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Re: Sitting On A Cloud
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by wizard on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 01:26:05 PM AEST
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nicely done,
great imagery,
wiz |
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