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You
Contributed by
ZiggyB
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Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 09:49:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You
I,
Feel that my need of you is for more
Yet it is the circumstance of this instance
That I can only take that which I am given
And simultaneously, you cant take back
That which you have already given to me
For I will always have that,
And you
Copyright ©
ZiggyB
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2008-04-07 21:49:49]
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Re: You
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by Spike on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 11:10:40 PM AEST
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ZiggyB,
This place will do that to you - I started with about 10 poems and got inspired.
Nice piece. It has a gentle, crisp quality too it; the argument is irrefutable and so characteristic of heart-talk.
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Re: You
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 10:01:36 AM AEST
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Spike speaks very much truth! I wanted an opinion on one piece... three years later and I do need help with my addiction (although I occassionally disappear with a bout of the dreaded 'block').
I loved teh way this almost felt like a contractual agreement... yet at the same time was very poetic... beautiful sentiment, very nice,
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