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Stained Glass
Contributed by
Aleph
on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 06:33:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Pictures in stained glass
Patterns dancing in the light
A room filled with wonder
All behold with delight
In day the beauty reigns
In darkness the patterns hide
Without the glass the light is harsh
Without the light the glass is cold
The room is the stage and the dance unfolds
What happens then
If the light is too tired to shine
If the glass is too covered to glow
The room is only a room
And all that is left is the memory
Of patterns dancing in the light
Copyright ©
Aleph
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2008-04-12 06:33:53]
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Re: Stained Glass
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 06:49:02 AM AEST
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| wow..this is wonderfully written.. you have succeeded in your quest.. I loved the imagery here... Thank you for sharing this...Jenni |
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Re: Stained Glass
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by Aleph on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 06:59:15 AM AEST
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| Thank you for your comment. :) I normally don't share what I write, but I've been encouraged too recently. I have a message board I belong to that's wide and varied and the only comments I get are from people who know me anyway, so I feel their reactions are biased. I finally decided to hunt down a real poetry site and see what people thought. I appreciate it greatly. |
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Re: Stained Glass
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by diba_perfect on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 08:46:42 AM AEST
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| awesum picture u've painted buddy..juz 2 good..keep it up..!! |
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Re: Stained Glass
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by funnyface09 on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 12:47:40 PM AEST
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you have painted the room with your very nice words...thanks for sharing..
keep writing and posting.... |
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