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Carpe Diem
Contributed by
blissful-ignorance
on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 12:54:06 PM in AEST
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sieze the day
the sun may not rise tomorrow
you may not take a breath again
something someday will be lost
make sure you have nothing to regret
sieze the day
you can never love someone too much
never be too happy
its impossible to care for too many people
indulge yourself today tomorrow it may be gone
sieze the day
you never know when something will be lost
make sure that you can look back
and say that it was a good life
and you never wasted a minute
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2008-04-15 12:54:06]
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Re: Carpe Diem
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by jantra on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 03:45:18 PM AEST
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| hi i actually liked your poem and the sentiment expressed within in. however i do have to point out that "sieze" is spelled incorrectly. It is spelled seize. While i am not one to correct spelling since i make as many errors as the next person, i felt in this case the spelling error was distracting because it was the line that the whole poem was centered around. |
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Re: Carpe Diem
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 07:49:38 AM AEST
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This poem is very enjoyable and true!
Some very good advice there if you take it
literally.
good poem!! |
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