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Where are you now?
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
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Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 09:48:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sometimes I think of you and wonder where you are and if you think of me on lonely nights or dream about me when theres nothing left to dream
I dont expect you to miss me and I know the phone will never ring with your voice hanging on the other line but I have to know if Im in your thoughts or if you forgot about me like you promised you never would
I cant bear the thought of what we shared being nothing more than a footnote in a forgotten chapter of your life and even though I only think of you during the loneliest hours of the night
Part of me is still hoping that youre thinking of me when Im busy not thinking of you
So shed not a tear for what we lost nor heave a sigh for what could have been
Just let me grace your thoughts when the night hangs long and low and everything will be right when we awake in the worlds weve created in the days weve been apart
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MajesticPoet
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2008-04-16 09:48:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Where are you now?
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 11:14:16 AM AEST (User
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I understand fully what you have written here. This describes the life many lead. Thank you for posting this.
Deadwriter
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Re: Where are you now?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 11:34:59 AM AEST (User
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Really sad and touching.. Too bad many lack the skills of communication.....myself included
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Re: Where are you now?
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 12:21:41 PM AEST (User
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This is a touching write. One of the hardest things to do is exist within four walls with nothing in between.
I mirror the others thoughts it is all to real.
Been there done that and oh what a sad feeling it is.
Hugsss
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Re: Where are you now?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Aleph on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 09:23:37 PM AEST (User
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I love this poem. I know I've felt that way before and sometimes even still do. I know too keenly what you wrote in your introduction, as well. It captures what we all desire, even after it's over: "think of me, even briefly." That wish for valadation after the fact is wonderfully captured here. |
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Re: Where are you now?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 05:52:00 AM AEST (User
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"Think of me,...think of me fondly..." from a great paly, and this piece reminds me of that.
Well written and I do so you you two work things out. |
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