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Save me from this place
Contributed by
xxILoveTheSilencexx
on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 08:52:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The end of your love brought me to do this.
It isn't very fun,
to stare down this loaded gun.
So save me from this never ending nightmare.
Take me away from this place.
Tell me that you love me again,
and that we can be more than just friends.
I can't live without the warmth of your love,
or the feel of your lips.
The end of your love brought me to this place.
To end it now.
It isn't that much fun,
to feel the pain of water filling your lungs.
So save me from this place.
take me away from this never ending nightmare.
Tell me that you love me again,
and that we can be more than just friends.
This life means nothing anymore.
But for now I will be ready for you with an open door.
But the end of your love it brought me to do this,
Trust me it isn't very fun,
To feel the blood drip down your wrist.
So save me from this never ending nightmare.
Take me away from this place.
Tell me that you love me again,
and that we can be more than just friends.
I'll love you till the day I die.
which won't be far off.
I'll love you till my eyes run dry.
And you will see me in the sky.
The day you say that you love me again,
will be the happiest of my life.
You are the one I need.
I am the one you loath.
The love I feel for you,
will never die.
Just tell me you love me to.
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xxILoveTheSilencexx
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2008-04-16 20:52:34]
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Re: Save me from this place
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 05:20:45 AM AEST
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| Nicely worded etc...but I don't think any man/person is worth taking your life over... Just my humble opinion... Jenni |
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Re: Save me from this place
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 10:55:04 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenni. Powerful write, but no single person should hold the power over another to make them want to end their life. Sometimes you must open the other door yourself and walk a different direction. Loves Light shines from more than one place.
Deadwriter
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Re: Save me from this place
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by SilverRain on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 07:16:21 PM AEST
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| very powerfull...have been there and have the internal scars to prove it. It does get better. |
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